haha! thats brilliant, wasnt expecting that
i love the last pannel that really looks good (: <3
keep it up ana

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Nice

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Thanks a lot^^
If you have something to tell about the pages that you think that could be better, tell me that i´m open to suggestions

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Thank you very much^^
If you want, I call tell you when will submit the next page (in a week time )

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Furry and awesome, they can be beasts or rarely, as anthro. Funny and active series called Cursed Tails! [link]

XD wow...thats just amazing XD

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Thanks a lot^^
I had to add some joke...it turned a bit silly, XD

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Furry and awesome, they can be beasts or rarely, as anthro. Funny and active series called Cursed Tails! [link]

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Angels and Demons can't cross over onto our plane. So, instead we get what I call half-breeds. The influence peddlers. They can only whisper in our ears. But a single word can give you courage, or turn your favorite pleasure into your worst nightmare.

right on, this is a super awsome comic page, and I haven't really expected such a funny joke in here.!! ^^ awsome job, you surprised us all!
anyway, Ilda, I have a question to you... can you tell me if you believe that I can edit all my EP pages in a way so that they really can be published? I ask because I got an offer to publish my manga, but for that I need to ink all pages digitally. and since you are learning how to draw comic pages porperly, can you tell me whatever you know about it??

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.. There are STILL errors! I even sent you the message in ALL CAPS so you could copy and paste it with ease. Are you retyping everything? That is why I made it in all caps, so that you don't have to do that!

In my script on the second panel, it's not meant to be "First, you try to kill me now".. it's meant to be "First, you try to kill me, and now..."

Meant to be "It's not my business" not "is not my business."

And it's meant to be "freaky-haired" not "freak-haired".. then again that's a debatable one. But if you want to change dialogue, couldn't you run it by me since I'm meant to be the one assisting you with the script?

I am seriously still willing to help you, but you continually keep retyping and redoing the same errors I corrected. What do you keep doing with the script? Not to be mean, but I know English pretty well. I'm trying to fix your mistakes but you keep putting poorly worded dialogue back in there. Should I bother if the errors continue getting put back?

And regarding the art.. I still greatly commend you over changing the fonts, it's really easy on the eyes. And I'm not really experienced when it comes to doing tones in comics so it looks like that's coming off quite well. You're getting the hang of photoshop and it clearly shows in recent work! It's looking a lot cleaner and more interpretable, keep going!

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XD Oh my gosh!XD That joke was kinda weird but funny!XD I just love this series though because it's about animals instead of humanoid animals.XD Oh! And have you ever p-layed SA2B? (Sonic adventure 2 battle)

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